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Saturday, February 05, 2005
Power Words, Idioms, Lines


These are some of the power words, idioms and lines which can be used in the GMAT essays

1) In support of this conclusion the author cites that

2) rosy prediction

3) There is, however, no guarantee that this is the case, nor does the author cite any evidence to
    support this assumption.

4) Lacking this assumption ________ is entirely unfounded.

5) As it stands the author's argument is not compelling.

6) substantiate author's claim

7) In my view, _______ takes precedence over ___________

8) Although we may not have conclusive scientific evidence of a cause-effect relationship, ample 
    anecdotal evidence establishes a significant correlation.

9) The harm it produces is, in my view, both palpable and profound.

10) provides a feeble rationale for the preference of _______ over _______

 

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Thursday, February 03, 2005
Analysis of an Argument 1

The following appeared as part of an annual report sent to stockholders by Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods.

“Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its twenty-fifth birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.”

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.


The author concludes that Olympic Foods, a processor of frozen foods should be able to minimize costs and maximize profits because it has a long industry experience. The author's line of reasoning is that a similar result has been observed in color film processing. The argument is unconvincing for several reasons.

First of all, the reasoning of lowering the costs and maximizing profits is based on a questionable assumption of a similar observation in the color film processing. However, this comparision is unwarranted. Moreover, the various factors like costs of raw materials, processing costs, cost of storage and transporation, which might have led to color film processing cost reduction, may not apply equally well to the food processing industry.

Secondly, the author assumes that having a long experience is a established way of reducing costs and maximizing profits. However, it might be entirely valid that an organization existing for such a long period may have many outdated processes, which would be unfit in present scenario, leading to inefficiences. Also, it may have old machinery or lack of innovation which is a key facor to successfully compete in market. It seems equally reasonable to assume that having a long experience may infact deter the chances of making the organization efficient.

Finally, the author fails to consider the impact of the entire industry. For example, the entire food industry may be going through a depression period and with such a market trend, it may not be possible to further reduce costs and hence maximize the profits.

In conclusion, to convince me that Olympic Foods shall be able to lower the costs and increase the profits, the author would have to provide me with substantial evidence that the company is indeed following the most efficient practises. Also the company is flexible to any innovative changes. Without these additional evidence, I am not convinced that Olympic Foods will be able to reduce its various costs and maximize its profits.


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Sunday, March 20, 2005
Advice on AWA Issue


Advice from "CORAL" on TestMagic

I scored 6.0/6.0 in my real toefl essay and gmat essays. Here is what worked for me:

1. Start with a great introduction. Take sides - do you see flaws in the topic or not - typically there will be several flaws in the topic. Do you think the flaws can be addressed if extra information is provided?

2. In the second paragraph, write about the most important flaw. Say why you think this is a flaw, and what kind of impact it has on making the decision. Say what would kind of information would help to go in favour of the author.

3. Repeat #2 for the 2nd major flaw.

4. Repeat #2 for the 3rd major flaw. (Depending on your typing speed, and the number of flaws you have identified, you can repeat #2 in several paragraphs. My essays are typically between 5 and 6 paragraphs including intro & conclusion).

6. Provide more details that may help the case in your opinion, even though the question stem does not expect you to.

7. Summarize what you have written so far. I usually conlcude it in favour of the author by stating that, the author can succeed if he address all the issues that I pointed out in my essay.

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Analysis of Issue 4


Whether the people whose children go to non-public schools should fund the public schools or not through taxes, depends on many factors. I believe that everyone should fund the public schools irrespective of the fact that their children go into public or private schools.

The primary reason for my stand is that education is the most important factor for the growth of any nation. If public schools are not funded properly, then many families that are unable to send their children to costly private schools would not be able to educate their children. These children would remain illiterate and the society will not benefit in long run. An educated society will be more economically strong and this will in-turn help everyone including those who studied in private schools.

The second reason is that having no education will cause more unemployment which ultimately leads to frustration and hence to criminal behaviour. A good education significantly reduces the chance of a person to choose an illegal path. This will benefit the society and everyone living in the society. The country will become a better place to live.

Thirdly, every citizen of a country has a social responsibility for the upliftment of the poor and needy. Considering that  a person gains so much from society during his lifetime, funding public schools through taxes can be considered as a small repaying back to the society. This way people can get a mental satisfaction of doing something good for their own country.

Although many people would consider it as a waste of their money, but rather than focussing only on immediate gain, they should regard it as a long term benefit. It would be considered logical that if our children do not go to public schools then we should not fund the schools, but it would be a narrow approach to look at the situation. A broder look would be to consider the benefit of an educated society and the ultimate benefit to their next generation. It is similar to planting trees which will not benefit us immediately but only to our later generations.

In conclusion, I would strongly support that everyone should fund the public schools through taxes for the mutual long term benefit to the society.


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Saturday, March 19, 2005
Analysis of Argument 4


The author puts the argument that any vacation resort can ill afford not to publicize its offerrings on Trevelshack.com. The argument is based upon the case of Snowbert Ski Lodge, which is now booked to capacity following its advertising on Travelshack.com website. The argument is unconvincing for several reasons.

Firstly, Travelshack.com fails to provide any data regarding the difference in Snowbert Ski Lodge's booking prior to advertising on its website and after the advertising. A thorough analysis and sufficient data about the website's advertising influence on the Snowbert Ski Lodge's booking and profit is necessary.

Secondly, it fails to indicate that Snowbert Ski Lodge has used no other advertising mechanism than on the webstie which leads to its high booking capaccity and the increase in its profit. It might be possible that Snowbert Ski Lodge used some other advertising mechanism and a combined advertising efforts would have resulted in such high level of booking and profits.

Thirdly, it does not provide sufficient information regarding the Snowbert Ski Lodge capacity. It might be possible that Snowbert Ski Lodge is a small Lodge and that might be the reason for its full capacity with so little advertisement. It also fails to mention whether there has been any sudden spurts in visitors due to some annual festival last year or some big sporting event, which might lead to high traffic irrespective of advertising.

In conclusion, to convince me that any vacation resort can ill afford not to publicize its offerrings on Trevelshack.com, the website has to supply more data regarding the influence of adversting on its website on any specific Lodge. It also has to mention that the last year is a typical year and the number of visitors have not changed significantly. Unless this information is provided, I am not fully convinced with the author's arguments.


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Sunday, February 20, 2005
Analysis of Issue 2

“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices  necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support  your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

I wrote the analysis, but lost it due to error in saving it. :-(


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Analysis of Argument 2

The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company.

“When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location, it was more profitable than it is today. Therefore, the Apogee Company should close down its field offices and conduct all its operations from a single location. Such centralization would improve profitability by cutting costs and helping the company maintain better supervision of all employees.”
                 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be
sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.


The author concludes that the Apoogee Company would imporve profitability by cutting costs and helping the company maintain better supervision of all employees because of centralised operations. The author's line of reasoning is that when the company was located in a single location, it was more profitable than it was today. The argument is unconvincing for several reasons.

Firstly, centralisation would improve profitability is based on the questionable assumption that centralisation would imply cutting costs and better employee supervision. However, it might be possible that with so many employees at a single location would inturn detoriate the employee supervision, due to more employees per supervisior. Also, a single location may not be able to attract a high level of quality employees thus reducing the productivity.

Secondly, the author assumes that the Apoogee Company was profitable in the past solely due to having a single location. However, it seems equally resonable to assume that during that period the operations of the company may be small enough to keep it profitable in a single location. Also, the nature of the operations of the company would have allowed the company to stay profitable in a single location.

Finally, the author fails to indicate the nature of the company. For example, a media company, which requires to keep information about various geographic regions, may not be profitable in a single location, while a Information Technology company, may remain profitable working from a single location.

In conclusion, to convince me that the Apoogee Company would become profitable from a centralised location, the author would have to provide evidence that it is indeed able to cut-off costs and improve employee supervision, operating from a single location. Without this additional evidence, I am not convinced that it would be profitable for Apoogee Company to close down its various locations and maintain a single location.


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Saturday, February 19, 2005
Analysis of an Argument 3


The following appeared in a memorandum issued by a large city’s council on the arts.

“In a recent citywide poll, fifteen percent more residents said that they watch television programs about the visual arts than was the case in a poll conducted five years ago. During these past five years, the number of people visiting our city’s art museums has increased by a similar percentage. Since the corporate funding that supports public television, where most of the visual arts programs appear, is now being threatened with severe cuts, we can expect that attendance at our city’s art museums will also start to decrease. Thus some of the city’s funds for supporting the arts should be reallocated to public television.”

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.

The author concludes that some of the city’s funds for supporting the arts should be reallocated to public television because of a possible decrease of attendance at city’s art museums. The author's line of reasoning is that since there is a simlar percentage increase of the people visiting city’s art museums as the percentage increase in the number of people who watch television programs about the visual arts, hence a severe cut in corporate funding that supports public television will lead to decrease in attendance at city's art museums. The argument is unconvincing for multiple reasons.

Firstly, the author's conclusion is based upon the unquestionable assumption that if a percentage increase of public television viewers and art museum goers occurs in the same period of time, a decrease in one will lead to a decrease in other. The author has provided no evidence to concur that public television viewers and art museum goers have any direct relationship.

Secondly, the author assumes that any corporate cuts to public televison will reduce the number of televison viewers interested in art programs. Moreover, if there occurs a reduction in public television viewers, it seems equally reasonable to assume that these people might consider going to art museum thereby increasing the number of visitors.

In conclusion, to convince me that  city’s funds for supporting the arts should be reallocated to public television because of a possible decrease of attendance at city’s art museums, the author has to provide evidence that there exist a concrete and linear relationship between televison viewers interested in art programs and art museum goers. Also the author has to cite the proof of relation between the corporate spending on televison programs and a reduction in its viewership. Without these additional evidences, I am not convinced that city’s funds for supporting the arts should be reallocated to public television.

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Analysis of an Issue 3


“Corporations and other businesses should try to eliminate the many ranks and salary grades that classify employees according to their experience and expertise. A ‘flat’ organizational structure is more likely to encourage collegiality and cooperation among employees.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.


Whether a flat organizational structure is more likely to encourage collegiality and cooperation among employees or not depends on multiple factors. In my view a flat structure is not helpful in developing or encouraging collegiality and cooperation among employees.

The main reason for my view is that a flat organizational structure will rather increase the animosity and jealousness among employees. For example, a hard working person will have same ranks and salary grades as a person who is inhenrently lazy. Also, this will lead to complacency among workers rather than giving their best to the company. Finally, a hard worker is likely to follow the path of laziness and depression, given the fact that despite his hard work, he is not rewarded appropriately.

Another reason for my view is that a flat organizational structure will lead to blame-game. Specifically, owing to flat structure, there will be a lack of clarity about the responsibilities among the employees. This will lead to blaming each other amongst the employees in the event of any failure. This in turn reduces productivity and a lack of co-operation.

Some might argue that a flat structure will allow positive critisim of everyone's work without any fear of seniority or bossism. Yet, it might lead to lack of focus among the group to attain a specific task. Others might cite that it will stop an employee for working only for the benefit of reaching higher salary or ranks. However, it might make an employee complacent towards his or her work, leading to no competitiveness or motivation to do any work at all.

In sum, I agree that a flat organization is not only unprodcutive but even detremental to the organization's growth. However, I agree that a flat organization may reduce a fierce competition which exists solely to reach higher ranks or to get higher salaries. On balance, a complete flat organization will lead to decreasing 
collegiality and cooperation among the employees, but a partial flat structure keeping in mind the employees expertise, experience and past performance will be beneficial.

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Sunday, February 06, 2005
AWA - what worked for me

 

AWA - what worked for me

i wrote short sentences. made sure there no grammatical errors whatsoever, simply because the sentences were so short.

had a couple of templates i had created for myself for both the essays ( borrowing heavily from the princeton and kaplan examples ). day before the test, thrashed out a few topics with my friends as an oral debate. made sure that i had at least 5 minutes left after writing each essay to proofread it. made sure each paragraph contained just one idea. made sure there were concrete examples in the issue essay, to support general statements i made.

i made a 6.0, and i know i suck in writing essays

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